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Showing posts with label flap copy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label flap copy. Show all posts

Thursday, May 27, 2010

Back in the Day...

I just arrived in Maine for my sister's graduation this Saturday, and I already noticed something pretty awesome about our rooms: Each one has BOOKS!!!

Most of them don't seem familiar. This one, for example, is older than my parents: THE HEADLAND, by Carol Brink (MacMillan, 1955).

The flap copy cracks me up:

"The small village on the coast of France was the home of the five children each summer. Their lives were bound together, though, on the nearby headland--a wild, romantic place with its ruined castle and strange well shaft leading down through dark rock to the sea. For it was on the headland that John and Hilda Marsh, Raoul and Catalina Jiminez, and lonely Vicky Chalmers became friends.

"From the first, John, a gentle, sensitive boy, found himself drawn to the quiet, devout Catalina. For the passionate Hilda and Raoul, love was a more intense, dangerous bond, yet one which even the bitterness and savageness of war could not break. Vicky followed the others patiently, keeping her own love silent.

"Each of them except Raoul--the inscrutable, willful, dominant personality--helps tell the story. Through their words we share deeply the magic of their childhood on the headland, the meaning of their love, and the tragedy brought to their lives by the Second World War.

"The story of the linked destinies of the five vivid people is a tale of mounting excitement, written in scenes with sharp, authentic realism--a story which casts a spell of strange beauty and romance."

Giggle.

It reminds me of the description blurbs we used to write for titlesheets (ie. the book report that editorial wrote before presenting new titles to the rest of the company).

The author bio is the same way:

"With her two previous novels, BUFFALO COAT and STOPOVER; her many books for children; and her biography, HARPS IN THE WIND, Carol Brink has firmly established her appeal for readers of all ages.

"Mrs. Brink began her writing career with stories for boys and girls, and in 1935 she was awarded the Newbery Medal for 'Caddie Woodlawn.'

"Each of her adult novels reveals her extraordinary talent for recapturing in fiction the atmosphere of places she knows well. Mrs. Brink was born and raised in Idaho, near the rugged country she describes in BUFFALO COAT. The setting of STOPOVER is a small town in Minnesota, the state in which she has spent most of her married life. Her present novel brilliantly reflects her intimate knowledge of--and love for--France."

Did you catch the shocker in there?

Carol Brinks won the friggin' Newbery!!!!

Strangely though, I get the feeling like whoever wrote the bio is a little apologetic about her success as a children's author, don't you?

Thursday, January 14, 2010

The Search Begins.

I just wrote my first query letter!!!

Exclamation points aside, it's not the funnest thing in the world. A little nerve-wracking, to be honest. How do you boil 70,000 words to just 250, while making it sound enticing, lively, and irresistible?

Wait, this sounds like something I've done before...something I did in my previous incarnation as an editorial assistant....It sounds like...

WRITING FLAP COPY!

Yes, once upon a time, I wrote the descriptive copy on book covers. (I considered picking out a few of them from Amazon, but then I thought there might be legal issues there.)

I'm not saying that every single paragraph of cover copy was a brilliant masterpiece. Some of them could definitely be improved upon, but I have practice.

I will admit that it's a little tougher to describe your own manuscript - probably because only half of you sees the actual story in front of you and the other half just sees the vision of what you wanted it to be. (One category is not necessary better than the other.)

But if you think about it, query letters are actually a better opportunity to represent your work. In the post-publication world, you usually only have two chances (ie. editions) to sell the book to readers: the flap copy of the hardcover and the cover copy of the paperback. On the other hand, if one query letter doesn't get a lot of attention, I can always rewrite it before before I send it out again - to a fresh list of agents, of course.

Now, to compile my research into an agent query log on Excel...

(Please, note: This is euphoria after completing a task I've been stressing over for weeks. This bugged me much more than cover letters for job applications, but really, it's the same concept. You must learn to brag about yourself in a believable way.)